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« Reply #30 on: May 29, 2005, 09:54:09 pm »
ooh ooh what about me?

you dont have to, but if you incorporate me, you can let me die or make me really badass. Ill love you forever
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« Reply #31 on: May 29, 2005, 11:11:03 pm »
I was going to, until you said "Ill love you forever." NOW I won't do it. Ha ha!

But really, i would, but you're really hard to write about, Herb. You have no real 'one' distinguishable feature. You're a meld of a bunch, and that makes it hard. Plus, I still have no idea what yo'd look like.

Give me some details about your character like Trigger did, and I'll for sure do it up.

And has anyone found out who Ted is based on?

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« Reply #32 on: May 29, 2005, 11:25:09 pm »
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And has anyone found out who Ted is based on?


Gee, I wonder who THAT could be...

Even though I helped in the making of this piece of work, I enjoyed re-reading it. Wish I had a minion of my own...
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« Reply #33 on: May 30, 2005, 12:08:07 am »
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And maybe some specifics for your team, like your second in command being Nova or something (that name is okay, Nova. Remeber, they can be nickames) And do you want your team to be a scout team, a clean up team (like, after a big raid your team goes in and captures Howler straglers) or just a fast assault team that uses glowsticks in an overkill fashion?


I still like the Search And Rescue Idea the best, so i think I'll stick with that one. I think it'd be the best  one.


My second in command would be "Nova".

Nova: Cool, and stern, he keeps the team in line. Though he's not the commander its apparent that he wants to be. He does have a good sense of humor, and is funny when not on duty. And generally an alright guy. He uses one machine gun like weapon. Though the rounds he fires are small he can shoot rapidly and at many people at once. It is connected to a hose that leads to a backpack,, which insures a steady steam of rounds going at his enemies, that can be used for supresive fire. This is his only weaponry. Nova as well is about my size. And has Brown hair, and brown eyes.

My Third Would be "Skull"

He's the funniest of us all. Always when addressed, he answers wiith wit and humor. He's been a great friend of mine for awhile. And is always there if you need a guy to talk to. He uses a small buster gun as a primary weapon, and another small Buster, with a sheild as well. But he himself uses his own abilaties as a thrid weapon. Simaler to grenades, he uses "Snow bombs" to take down small groups of eneies at once, or in any other fashion he can think of. Hes great at using snowballs as giant grenades, especailly to get into some place, to take out the gaurds. Also has brown hair, but green eyes.


Fourth would be "Pirate"

Kinda annoying at times, and yet still pulls off being smart. Pirate is just one of the guys you'd like to hang out with afterschool. Pirate uses 4 Buster guns. Instead of waiting to reload his first ones in use, he puts them away and takes out his second pair and continues to fire. Once all ammo is depleted he then refills them. he has a very large Shell-like sheild on his back.  It hinders his movment a bit, but when he picks it up and uses it, it covers his whole body plus some. Pirate , like Skull, is skinny, but not quite as tall. Dark red hair, green eyes.


5th would be "Riles"

He's very short, becuase of this many larger weapons were unavialable to him. So he instead decided to take up snipering. Becuase he's quick and nimble, he can avoide most attacks, untill he reachs a suitable location to start fireing from. Hes about 4 feet tall (short in this case), skinny, and can be picked up and carried, quite easily. Black hair, brown eyes.

6th is "Mikey boy"

As with the rest of them, he has a greate sense of humor, but he doesn't controll is very well cracking jokes when its best they shouldnt be. He uses one large cannon. That has a widespread out shot, instead of one concentraited shot. It covers alot of ground, and enemies when fired right. He too is tall, But he isn't skinny, nor fat. He's somewhere in the middle. blonde hair, blue eyes.

These are all based off people I know, in some way or fashion. So they are best to be my team.

And I forgot to mention I have brown hair, and eyes that switch from blue to green on occasion.
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« Reply #34 on: May 30, 2005, 07:31:46 am »
Normally I would force Swiftman to put me in his story, but too late. I already am.

And it's good to have atleast one search and rescue team. But, judging by your firepower, you could be an assault team as well, if needed.
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« Reply #35 on: May 30, 2005, 08:05:22 am »
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Normally I would force Swiftman to put me in his story, but too late. I already am.

Holly, or Anita? Or someone yet to be introduced?

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And it's good to have atleast one search and rescue team. But, judging by your firepower, you could be an assault team as well, if needed.


I still like the search and rescue one best. :D Maybe a $\_/|?3/2 3|,,373 $34/2c|-| /\|\/|] |?,3$c\_/3 734/\/\?
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« Reply #36 on: May 30, 2005, 08:26:19 am »
It's not Anita, I'll tell you that. I wouldn't kick a midget like she did.
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« Reply #37 on: May 30, 2005, 08:29:32 am »
That leave Holly....Or Delia....


Holly?
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« Reply #38 on: May 30, 2005, 09:40:32 am »
Delia hasn't really been given an active part yet. But don't worry, I have plans.... Heh heh.

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« Reply #39 on: May 30, 2005, 10:16:18 am »
You know, when you laugh like that, its creepy. >.>
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« Reply #40 on: May 30, 2005, 10:29:57 am »
You haven't heard it in real life. If I could, I'd make a recording of it.

And he told me his plans with delia. It's nothing bad, I can tell you that. She has dealings with a future character on the Badger side.
You'll see. It all comes around in the end.

My only worry on your story, Swift, is that the battles aren't long enough. Sure, they have good detail, but seem to lack in bredth.
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« Reply #41 on: May 30, 2005, 05:34:24 pm »
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You haven't heard it in real life. If I could, I'd make a recording of it.


It's true. His laugh like that in real life is way creepier in real life. You have to hear it to believe it.
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« Reply #42 on: May 30, 2005, 06:39:19 pm »
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You haven't heard it in real life. If I could, I'd make a recording of it.


It's true. His laugh like that in real life is way creepier in real life. You have to hear it to believe it.
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Now that I think about it...I think I'll pass on any oppertunitys to hear him laugh like that.
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« Reply #43 on: May 31, 2005, 11:39:34 am »
Ugh! Why did Herb have to leave so hastily? I don't even know how to BEGIN to incorporate him in the story.

(and trigger: I got the plan for your team's intro to the story. The Crimson Bandits have some form of vehicular transportation, and Deccus's squad is sent out to get them, but they're beat back from massive counter-fire. [Deccus's team, that is, is shot back] they had disabled Kleth's radio, so they couldn't radio for help. Who comes to the rescue? THE (what's your teams's name, by the way?) YOU GUYS! Your ski-doo's are faster, and you have better firepower than Deccus and co., so you guys help chase down teh Crimson Bandits. Sound good?)

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« Reply #44 on: May 31, 2005, 11:54:09 am »
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(what's your teams's name, by the way?)


THE!!...*drum roll*....CATGIRLS!!! *shot*

No but really...If I were to mix up the places I've met these people that I know at...It would be "Arsinal Legacy"......

Kinda weird but thats all I can think of.
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